Here we have a story that combines–to unusual effect–lightness of tone and heart-wrenching pathos. It’s quite funny throughout and, finally, sad as hell. Taken in the context of our textbook chapter on revision, please consider the following questions.
How does “chemistry” function in this story, both metaphorically and practically? To put it another way, how would the story change if they’d met in, say, history, or English, or whatever? Surely any of those other classes might assign students to be partners.
How has the author prepared us for Barbara, against most common sense, actually going out with Keith in the first place? Why does she do it?
Do you feel sorry for Brian? Why or why not?
What role does Trish play? Why is she vital to the story? (Or is she?)
Usually stories are either funny or sad. Not too many of them are both. Why is this, and how has the author managed to have it both ways in this story?
Look at the earlier draft of “Keith” in your text, and read the penultimate section. In the earlier version it takes place while Keith is washing his truck. The final version is set in the airport. Why did Carlson make this change?